2022年4月23雅思大作文范文:城市劃分區(qū)域的利弊

2022年4月23雅思大作文范文

2022年4月23雅思大作文范文:城市劃分區(qū)域的利弊，關(guān)于這個(gè)問(wèn)題，接下來(lái)中國(guó)教育在線(xiàn)就給大家慢慢解答。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In many cities, planners build shops, schools, offices and homes in specific areas which may be separated from each other.

Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【話(huà)題分類(lèi)】

社會(huì)類(lèi)

【題目解析】

題目大意：很多城市的規(guī)劃者將城市分為不同的區(qū)域。這一個(gè)現(xiàn)象優(yōu)點(diǎn)是否大于缺點(diǎn)。

這是一個(gè)“優(yōu)劣勢(shì)”題型中outweigh的題目，故考生需要明確表達(dá)“優(yōu)大于劣”或“劣大于優(yōu)”的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，同時(shí)使用2:1的方式進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。

筆者認(rèn)為“優(yōu)大于劣”，故主體段3段，寫(xiě)兩個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)和一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)。

考生需要注意的是，在讓步段中不能寫(xiě)“反駁”，因?yàn)橐粋€(gè)段落有且只有一個(gè)中心。

【寫(xiě)作思路】

Para 1 = 題目改寫(xiě) + 個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn)（優(yōu)大于劣）

Para 2 = 優(yōu)點(diǎn)1

Para 3 = 優(yōu)點(diǎn)2

Para 4 = 缺點(diǎn)1

Para 5 = 重申觀(guān)點(diǎn) + 總結(jié)主體3個(gè)段中的理由

【參考范文】

Nowadays, planners of a great number of metropolises have designed particular areas to separate shopping malls, educational institutions, office buildings and residential blocks from one another. Personally, I am inclined to the view that the merits of this strategy prevail over the drawbacks.

The major benefit is that functional zoning makes the city layout easier to understand, especially for visitors. Before approaching and travelling around a certain city, visitors normally make an itinerary and strategy. If a clear city map can be referred to, they will get familiar with their destinations easily, thereby having an enjoyable experience and enjoying different facets of the place.

Another advantage is that the use of the infrastructure in an area can be optimised. For example, if housing regions are not scattered in different places within a city, the varied sports facilities constructed in a residential district can serve all people in the neighbourhood who want to participate in exercise at one time. When it comes to maintaining time, related costs can be reduced.

However, the disadvantages of this trend cannot be ignored, one of which is that the clustering of many buildings of the same function in certain areas is likely to generate high volumes of traffic, which leads to frequent traffic congestion in those areas. There are many vehicles gathering in front of a school gate in the early morning and late afternoon when parents drop off and pick up their children to and from classes; thus, heavy traffic jams may be caused.

In conclusion, I would like to iterate that there are more positive outcomes than the negative ones if a city is divided into areas with different functions. After all, people can find it easy to understand a city, and moreover, make the most of infrastructure.

(295 words)

【亮點(diǎn)詞匯及短語(yǔ)】

1．metropolis (n.) 大都市

2．separate … from … 把…和…分開(kāi)

3．educational institutions 學(xué)校

4．office buildings 辦公樓

5．residential blocks 住宅區(qū)

6．functional zoning 功能分區(qū)

7．city layout 城市布局

8．make an itinerary 做行程規(guī)劃

9．infrastructure (n.) 基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施

10．housing regions 住宅區(qū)

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