雅思大作文第一段應該怎么寫

2023-08-16 09:38:42 來源：中國教育在線

隨著人們經(jīng)濟水平的提高，對于很多家庭來說，留學不再是一個可望而不可及的事情，許多人都想要留學，那其中雅思大作文第一段應該怎么寫？針對這個問題，下面中國教育在線小編就來和大家分享一下。

雅思大作文第一段應該怎么寫

很多考生拿到大作文考題都不知道如何動筆去寫開頭段，有的會把題目原封不動抄下來，但如果這樣做，在統(tǒng)計作文字數(shù)時，第一段就不被統(tǒng)計在內(nèi)了。下面是小編搜集整理的關于雅思大作文第一段應該怎么寫的資料，歡迎查閱。

實際上大作文的第一段是情景鋪墊，在這一段要點明這篇文章要討論/解決什么問題及問題的背景。作文的首段通常包含以下幾個方面：

1)場景或背景信息，即題目中出現(xiàn)的phenomenon。

2)一些人的觀點(some people’s opinion)，這部分在改寫文章首段時可要可不要，考生可按照自己的情況來安排。

3)個人觀點，這一部分在有些文章的開首段中也可以不要。

大作文要求字數(shù)至少達到250字，在寫作中考慮到字數(shù)的合理安排，第一段最好寫3-5句話，大約40字左右，并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么話都說完。因此大作文開首方式通常有以下幾種情況：

1)題目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon)，有時也出現(xiàn)一些人的觀點，并且題目中字數(shù)較多。這種情況下最保險的辦法是將題目中的背景信息及一些人的觀點重新表達(paraphrase)，可以做:

●主動語態(tài)<=>被動語態(tài)

●主謂賓<=>主系表

●某些近義詞互換

Example:

At present, it is hard for college students to find jobs. Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practicalcourses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography. To what extent do you agree?

→ The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation. Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography. 其后再加考生自己的觀點即可。

2)題目中包含了背景信息，有時出現(xiàn)一些人的觀點，但題目中字數(shù)較少，若直接重新表達，字數(shù)湊不到40字左右。這種情況下我們有2種開首方式來保證字數(shù)。

◆把籠統(tǒng)信息細節(jié)化即通過舉例來解釋說明題目中的背景信息。

Example:

International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?

→The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism’s gaining momentum virtually all over the world. Each year，millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture. 其后加入考生個人觀點即可。

◆追溯歷史，過去與現(xiàn)在形成對比。

Example:

International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?

→Prior to the early 1900s, the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel. However, the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient. International tourism is gaining momentumand has become a big industry. 其后加入考生個人觀點即可。

3)題目中僅出現(xiàn)一部分人的觀點，而沒有背景信息。這種情況下，我們可以根據(jù)這部分人的觀點所涉及的信息在開首段附加對背景信息的描述。

Example:

The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?

→In the process of industrialization and urbanization, the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense. From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed, tried and implemented. Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem. 其后加入考生個人觀點即可。

另外考生要注意開首段一定要避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，因為如果語法錯誤影響文章的理解，那會給考官留下極差的第一印象，而考官也就沒有信心繼續(xù)往下讀了，最終大作文的得分也不會很高。

雅思寫作失分原因

同學們的文章實際長這樣：

a. Universities usually limit the quantity of new students as well as their genders to create more effective performances of their students with regard to this gender trait. (5分學生作品)

句子乍一看沒有語法問題，但詞語之間的邏輯混亂，導致理解障礙;

或者長這樣：

b. Secondly, even though using distance-learning programmes could provide any person with opportunities to learning knowledge in anywhere. While the computer or the study material post only can offer a correct answer or explain to students, the comprehension capability of every student varies from student to student, make it impossible for the computer to offer and explain catered to a students’ particular level of understanding.(5分學生作品)

復雜句和簡單句都存在許多問題，寫作評分在5分段。

上面的句式絕對不簡單，但是不是有一種看起來很高級、卻完全讀不懂的感覺?

我們可以發(fā)現(xiàn)5分考生們的句式不但不簡單，還非常復雜，問題更多的是出在了句子的邏輯通順和理解上。

雅思寫作基本原則

Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts.

簡潔是英文寫作的靈魂，為了做到這一點，要學會去掉所有無關的信息，同時還要學會精簡表達，一件事情能用一個詞說清楚就堅決不用兩個詞。

烤鴨們需要明白communication, accuracy, complexity在雅思寫作中的優(yōu)先順序：

綜合來看，communication(即表達清楚意思，考官看得懂)是根本;

任何犧牲communication 的高級表達都是耍流氓，分數(shù)不會超過6分，a和b 兩位同學都在這里掉了鏈子;

其次是accuracy表達正確，比表達高級來的更加重要。如果能做到這兩點，再能適當?shù)氖褂胏omplex sentences，就能起到畫龍點睛的作用，語法果斷上6分，甚至沖7分。

雅思寫作高分和復雜句

c. First of all, studying in school allows students to arrange their time reasonably to ensure efficient learning. Teachers in school provide fixed time table for studying. By contrast, study time via Internet is rather flexible; students have the freedom to study by themselves, but for students who lack self-control, their learning task might stay unfinished when the deadline comes.

(烤鴨6分習作)

雅思寫作要上6分，語法要多難，究竟該不該使用復雜句?我們來看一下c同學平時聯(lián)系作業(yè)(最終雅思寫作考分6.5)：

相比之下，c同學的寫作句式完全沒有上面復雜，但是意思清楚，合理運用連接詞，文章的論證邏輯基本合理。

綜上，我們可以得出結(jié)論：雅思寫作最主要的是要表達清晰，邏輯清楚，不需要過分追求長難句。