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中國托?？忌绾伪苊庵惺接⑽?/></p><p>1、Original: If we agree to say that school offers us the best book knowledge acquisition then our society offers us the best surviving techniques in a hard way。</p><p>Revised: If we agree that school offers the best method for the acquisition of book knowledge, then our society offers us the best method for acquiring common sense or street smarts。</p><p>Agree to say that表達中式化，只需要agree that即可;the best book knowledge acquisition改為the best method for the acquisition of book knowledge(學校給我們提供了獲取書本知識的最好方法)更為恰當 ，同樣后面的the best surviving techniques改為the best method for acquiring common sense,加上street marks(街頭智慧)給文章的托福詞匯增添色彩。</p><p>2、Original: They can spend more time studying education and communication to improve their role as a mother, wife and daughter。</p><p>Revised: They can also decide to spend more time studying, education themselves, in order to improve themselves in their roles as mothers, wives and daughters。</p><p>原句中studying education and communication的說法中式化，不符合英語的表述，應(yīng)該為studying，educating themselves。除了詞語表達，此句中還存在其他問題，如名詞單復數(shù)的使用：不是提高他們的角色，而是提高他們自身以扮演好母親角色。</p><p>還有，女性不止一個人。很多人都在扮演母親角色，role和mother應(yīng)用復數(shù)，故將improve their role as a mother改為improve themselves in their roles as mother;同樣，為保持一致，wife和daughter也可用復數(shù)，原文中wife的復數(shù)寫法有誤，應(yīng)該是wives。</p><p>3、Original：If you can get the point of communication by watching TV，will you...?</p><p>Revised：If one can learn about communicating from television，will you...?</p><p>原句的get the point of communication by watching TV表達不清，讓人難以理解，應(yīng)該是指從電視上學習交際：learn about communicating from television。</p><p>以上就是“中國托?？忌绾伪苊庵惺接⑽摹钡娜績?nèi)容了，希望小編整理的資料能幫助到考生。如果想要了解更多相關(guān)資訊，歡迎關(guān)注留學頻道，為您提供更多精彩內(nèi)容。</p> <p onclick=>> 雅思 托福 免費課程學習，AI量身規(guī)劃讓英語學習不再困難<<

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