雅思大作文范文：人們更多穿西式服裝而不穿傳統(tǒng)服裝

雅思大作文范文：人們更多穿西式服裝而不穿傳統(tǒng)服裝

雅思大作文題目：

In many countries,people wear more western-style clothes(suits and jeans)than their traditional clothes.

Why is this happening?Is it a positive or negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

【話題分類】：社會生活類

【題目解析】：

題目大意：在很多國家，人們更多穿西式服裝（西裝和牛仔褲）而不是他們的傳統(tǒng)服裝。其原因是什么？這樣的趨勢是積極的還是消極的?

從題型看，這個題目是一道“two-question essay”，要求考生回答兩個問題。在回答第一個問題“why”時，建議考生呈現(xiàn)兩個ideas并作出詳細的解釋和論證；同時，表達“positive/negative trend”觀點時，采用“一邊倒”的方式會較為簡單和直接，給出兩個理由并作出相應的解釋即可。

【寫作思路】：

開頭段：改寫題目+文章結(jié)構(gòu)

主體段1：回答題目中第一個問題，即“why”

1）西方時尚服裝的巨大影響；

2）西式服裝的便利特質(zhì)

主體段2：回答題目中第二個問題，即“positive/negative trend”

totally believe“negative”的原因---

1）影響本國文化傳承；

2）打擊本國傳統(tǒng)服裝業(yè)

結(jié)尾段：總結(jié)全文內(nèi)容（改寫主體第一段和主體第二段的主要內(nèi)容）

【參考范文】

Individuals in many nations prefer clothing derived from western countries instead of dressing themselves in clothing based on their culture.This essay will initially discuss the causes of this trend,followed by my firm opinion that it is an adverse development.

There are mainly two factors behind people’s increased predisposition for wearing western-style attire rather than their traditional garments.The first thing to consider is the heavy influence of western fashion.The popular ways westerners dress themselves has not only been introduced to the rest of the world via multifarious media resources by globalisation but also excessively promoted,making it possible for non-westerners to imitate the styles and give up their traditional clothing.Additionally,western wear is generally more convenient regarding people’s everyday activities.Western-style clothes are known to be simple in design and easy to wear.Hence,people normally do not need to spend much time dressing themselves up by putting on jeans or T-shirts before going out.In contrast,wearing Japanese Kimono,for example is quite time-consuming.

However,whatever reasons are provided,I strongly believe negative consequences will eventually be entailed.Firstly,the passing down of local cultures can be detrimentally impacted.If fewer people wear their traditional clothes,the specific cultures embedded in the costumes will be overlooked.An obvious illustration is that many young people in China do not understand the meanings of the cheongsam and what this clothing truly represents.Secondly,the traditional clothing industry may suffer economically.Factories manufacturing traditional clothes cannot sell out their products,let alone make profits.That is why many enterprises of this kind have gone bankrupt.

In conclusion,the tremendous effect of western fashion and the convenience of western-style clothes lead to people choosing to wear more clothes from the west.Despite these reasons,I completely argue this situation will result in negative outcomes,including stopping indigenous cultures from being passed down to future generations and causing damage to the local traditional clothing industry.

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【亮點詞匯及短語】

1.(be)derived from源于

2.dress oneself in讓…穿上…服裝

3.adverse(adj.)負面的

4.predisposition(n.)傾向

5.attire(n.)服裝

6.garment(n.)服裝

7.heavy influence of…的巨大影響

8.westerner(n.)西方人

9.everyday activities日常活動

10.time-consuming(adj.)耗時的

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