托福獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)高頻話題：誰(shuí)應(yīng)該對(duì)孩子的教育更負(fù)責(zé)，學(xué)校還是父母?

托福獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)高頻話題：誰(shuí)應(yīng)該對(duì)孩子的教育更負(fù)責(zé)，學(xué)校還是父母?

托福獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)高頻話題

Who should be more responsible for children's education,schools or parents?

學(xué)生對(duì)此話題的表述答案

Although both the schools and parents should be responsible for children's educations.For me,that I think that the school should be more responsible for children's educations.First,that childrens spend a large amount of time in school,and the school's function is to teach students how to behave and teach the knowledge.And therefore,I think that children is more influenced by the schools and so school should be more responsible for teach students to educate the childrens.

批改意見

語(yǔ)法方面出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤(Grammar)

1 educations————education

2 childrens spend————children spend

3 children is————children are

4 and therefore————Therefore

表達(dá)部分存在的問題(Expression)

1 for childrens education(delete)

2 For me,I think————I think

3 and teach the knowledge————and be knowledgable

高頻話題高分口語(yǔ)模板分享

Although both the schools and parents should be responsible for children's education,I think that the school should be more responsible.First,children spend a large amount of time in school,and the school's function is to teach students how to behave and be knowledgable.Therefore,I think the children are more influenced by the schools.Schools should be more responsible to educate the children.

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