雅思大作文范文：降低環(huán)境破壞的責(zé)任在于政府

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雅思大作文范文：降低環(huán)境破壞的責(zé)任在于政府

雅思大作文題目：

The responsibility for protecting and reducing global environmental damage lies with politicians as there is very little that individuals can do about this.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

【話題分類】：環(huán)境類

【題目解析】：

題目大意：有人認(rèn)為降低環(huán)境破壞的責(zé)任在于政治家們（即政府），因?yàn)閭€體能起到的作用微乎甚微。在何種程度上同意這個觀點(diǎn)？

題型特點(diǎn)：對觀點(diǎn)需要表明清晰的立場；但該題目觀點(diǎn)包含了兩部分內(nèi)容，分別都需要回應(yīng)。

本文論文推進(jìn)：開頭引出環(huán)境問題的迫切，轉(zhuǎn)述題目中的觀點(diǎn)，并表明自己的立場。中間段先對觀點(diǎn)的第一部分(政府的責(zé)任)表示贊同，進(jìn)而對觀點(diǎn)的前提假設(shè)(個體的局限性)表示不認(rèn)同。最后總結(jié)全文，重申觀點(diǎn)。

【難點(diǎn)】本題主要在立論和對題目兩部分觀點(diǎn)的態(tài)度上，容易讓考生搖擺。

建議：

題目中除了觀點(diǎn)，還帶有一部分前提假設(shè)，用as/therefore引出的這一類題，同學(xué)們可以更為靈活的處理?？梢苑謩e對題目的觀點(diǎn)和前提表示態(tài)度。

考生的觀點(diǎn)可以是：1）觀點(diǎn)和前提都同意；2）觀點(diǎn)和前提都不同意；3）同意觀點(diǎn)但前提不認(rèn)可。

以上三種立論，都能做到清晰回答題目的問題。

【寫作思路】：

開頭段：環(huán)境問題備受關(guān)注也迫在眉睫，一些人認(rèn)為這個問題主要是政治家即政府的責(zé)任，個人的作用很小。表明個人立場——政府的責(zé)任毋庸置疑，而個體的作用同樣息息相關(guān)。

主體第一段：政治家確實(shí)有重大責(zé)任。可以分為政策引導(dǎo)和提供資金兩方面。

主體第二段：然而政策高度依賴個體的支持?？梢苑譃檎咧С?，以及加強(qiáng)日常生活的環(huán)保行為兩方面。

結(jié)尾段：環(huán)境破壞的減輕，政治家的責(zé)任責(zé)無旁貸，而個體在這個問題中所扮演的角色更為舉足輕重。

【參考范文】

Damage to the global environment is increasing at an alarming rate.Some people argue that government officials should be mainly held accountable for environmental protection,since little can be done by ordinary people.However,I believe although politicians do have a crucial role to play in addressing this problem,individual contributions are by no means negligible.

The fundamental part of governments in mitigating environmental damage is effective policy implementation on both domestic and international levels.By enacting laws and measures regarding global environmental issues,such as emission control,waste treatment practices,and sanctuaries for endangered species,policy makers are able to take concrete actions to realize sustainable development,because these policies act as guidelines for individuals and private sectors in their daily activities.Besides,it is politicians who can make sure sufficient funding is allocated in that regard,in order to support and sustain environment actions which have strong reliance on continuous investment.In essence,politicians can make a difference on a much bigger picture than individuals.

However,government policies and spending ultimately rely on public support,without which all efforts would be in vain.A convincing evidence is that similar environmental policies often have various outcomes in different countries,largely due to the level of public participation.When people have greater environmental awareness,they would be more willing to comply with relevant laws and regulations.Another responsibility of Individuals lies with everyday actions to protect the environment.For instance,recycling and reuse help to cut down waste;transport conservation assists in reducing greenhouse gas emissions;economizing energy use in daily life contributes to reducing excessive exploitation of natural resources.

In conclusion,I assert politicians have indisputable responsibility for reducing damage to the environment,but this does not mean that individual efforts are insignificant,since the general public can join hands with the government.Lack of individual participation could mean that addressing environmental issues is beyond reach.

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【亮點(diǎn)詞匯及短語】

1.at an alarming rate以令人擔(dān)憂的速度

2.be held accountable for被認(rèn)為有責(zé)任

3.hold…accountable for認(rèn)為…有責(zé)任

4.negligible(adj.)無足輕重的

5.by no means絕不可能

6.policy implementation政策執(zhí)行

7.on domestic level在本國層面

8.on international level在國際層面

9.enact(v.)實(shí)施

10.emission control控制排放