雅思大作文范文：媒體中限制報(bào)道犯罪行為細(xì)節(jié)

雅思大作文范文：媒體中限制報(bào)道犯罪行為細(xì)節(jié)

雅思大作文題目：

Some people think that the detailed description of crimes on newspapers and TV has bad consequences,so this kind of information should be restricted in the media.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【話題分類】：媒體類

【題目解析】：

題目大意：一些人認(rèn)為報(bào)紙和電視上對(duì)于犯罪行為的細(xì)節(jié)描述有負(fù)面的影響，因此這樣的信息在媒體中應(yīng)該被限制。在何種程度上同意這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)？

題型特點(diǎn)：需明確表明對(duì)觀點(diǎn)的態(tài)度；同時(shí)，題目中有一部分信息是觀點(diǎn)的原因，對(duì)犯罪行為的細(xì)節(jié)描述有負(fù)面影響，對(duì)這部分信息不能忽略了回應(yīng)，可以跟主體段證明應(yīng)該被限制放在一起回應(yīng)。

本文論文推進(jìn)：開(kāi)頭引出當(dāng)下關(guān)于媒體的爭(zhēng)議，以及題目中的觀點(diǎn)，表明自己立場(chǎng)。中間段先分析為何此類信息需要被限制，接著用讓步的方式承認(rèn)一些媒體上此類信息有一定好處，但過(guò)于細(xì)節(jié)的是需要限制的。結(jié)尾總結(jié)論點(diǎn)，重申觀點(diǎn)。

難點(diǎn)：這道題容易讓考生糾結(jié)限制的程度問(wèn)題，建議同學(xué)們針對(duì)題目給出的關(guān)鍵信息detailed description進(jìn)行回應(yīng)，即觀點(diǎn)是‘限制媒體上對(duì)于犯罪細(xì)節(jié)的描述’，而不是完全不對(duì)犯罪信息進(jìn)行報(bào)道。

【寫(xiě)作思路】：

開(kāi)頭段：當(dāng)下媒體自由度較高，對(duì)犯罪的報(bào)道也越來(lái)越豐富。有人擔(dān)心此類細(xì)節(jié)的報(bào)道會(huì)產(chǎn)生不良后果，應(yīng)該被限制。個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)表示同意。

主體第一段：之所以應(yīng)該限制這一類細(xì)節(jié)描述，有幾大原因。受到最大影響的是犯罪的受害者，報(bào)道過(guò)于細(xì)節(jié)，會(huì)加重他們的身心創(chuàng)傷，甚至侵犯隱私。而對(duì)普通大眾來(lái)說(shuō)也無(wú)益，細(xì)節(jié)描述含有過(guò)于血腥暴力的內(nèi)容，不僅引起不適，也讓人擔(dān)憂對(duì)年輕人的影響。三是對(duì)于一些潛在的犯罪份子，這些細(xì)節(jié)報(bào)道可能會(huì)給他們提供信息支持，刺激和慫恿了犯罪行為。

主體第二段：當(dāng)然，適度的報(bào)道有正向作用，也有人認(rèn)為在報(bào)紙和電視上對(duì)犯罪進(jìn)行一定程度的報(bào)道能夠讓大眾增強(qiáng)安全意識(shí)，了解犯罪份子的行為模式，改善保護(hù)措施，避免成為受害者。但報(bào)道的內(nèi)容應(yīng)當(dāng)進(jìn)行充分審查，進(jìn)行關(guān)鍵的說(shuō)明即可，細(xì)節(jié)的報(bào)道是沒(méi)有必要的。

結(jié)尾段：總的來(lái)說(shuō)，基于對(duì)群眾和犯罪率的影響，犯罪的細(xì)節(jié)描述是需要受到審查和限制的,雖然報(bào)紙和電視有協(xié)助大眾提高防范意識(shí)的責(zé)任。

【參考范文】

Increased degree of freedom in media reports has allowed exposure of crime cases to come forth in a detailed manner,which certainly arouses a great deal of concern.In light of this,some people believe there should be restrictions on such information.From my perspective,I agree that censorship should be imposed on the descriptions of crime.

There are several reasons why the focus of newspapers and television on high-profile crimes should be more carefully regulated.The group most affected by the news media's coverage of violence and victimization is crime victims.This is because media coverage that is sometimes viewed as insensitive,voyeuristic,and uncaring can largely violate victims’privacy and inflict their emotional and psychological suffering.Not only that,the general public seldom benefits from this exposure to crime details.In fact,these descriptions can not only cause discomfort but also arouse apprehension about the impacts on young people.Besides,it is likely that potential offenders would be instigated and incited to commit crimes,since they might regard detailed media coverage as a form of guidance.

It is undeniable that the coverage of crime cases can be helpful and,in some cases,even healing.Some would also suggest that the media have the obligation to keep the public well informed about trends in crime.Indeed,the media play a significant role in public safety by keeping citizens apprised of essential information on criminal affairs,such as new patterns of fraud,ways to assist victims and measures to prevent crime.However,the extent to which the media can cover about these cases should be censored carefully by avoiding excessively detailed descriptions,so that they can accurately cover crime stories with the least amount of trauma to the victim and negative repercussions on the public.

In conclusion,although newspapers and television need to raise the public awareness of key information on crime cases,I contend that restrictions should be imposed on excessive descriptions of details,in order to mitigate the detrimental consequences.

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【亮點(diǎn)詞匯及短語(yǔ)】

1.degree of freedom自由度

2.exposure(n.)曝光，暴露，揭發(fā)

3.come forth出現(xiàn)，涌現(xiàn)

4.in a detailed manner以一種細(xì)節(jié)的方式

5.censorship(n.)審查制度

6.impose(v.)施加

7.high-profile(adj.)高調(diào)的，受到關(guān)注的

8.coverage(n.)報(bào)道

9.crime victim犯罪受害者

10.insensitive(adj.)不友好的

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