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2022年4月16日雅思柱狀圖范文:1951到2011年小鎮(zhèn)人口變化

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2022年4月16日雅思柱狀圖范文

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar charts below show the information about the population in a particular town in the UK from 1951 to 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

注:圖形根據(jù)考場回憶繪制,具體細(xì)節(jié)或有出入。

【圖形分類】

動態(tài)多圖 – 柱狀圖

【題目解析】

題目大意:第一幅圖展示了一個英國小鎮(zhèn)1951-2011年人口變化,第二幅圖展示了該小鎮(zhèn)在同一時期不同年齡組人口百分比的變化情況。

題目有兩幅圖,故需要分為兩段分別描寫。同時,兩幅圖都是動態(tài)圖,故需要考生充分利用動態(tài)圖的句型。

第一幅圖,總體趨勢“先上升后下降”,描寫簡單;第二幅圖0-14, 15-29和65+三個年齡組是上升趨勢,10-39以及40-64稱下降趨勢,故主體第二段分為兩個部分。

【寫作思路】

Para 1 = 題目改寫 + 概述

Para 2 = 描寫第一幅圖

Para 3 = 描寫第二幅圖

【參考范文】

The first bar chart illustrates how many people lived in a certain British town between 1951 and 2011, while the second depicts how the proportion of residents from five various age groups changed during the same period. Overall, there was an increase in the total population of this place, despite a downward trend in the percentage of 30-64-year-olds.

In terms of the total population, the number was 100,000 in 1951. After that, it doubled, reaching 200,000 in 1991 before dropping slightly to approximately 175,000 in 2011.

Turning to the percentage of people of different ages, those under 15 and those between 15 and 29 accounted for 15% each. Following this, the figures grew gradually to roughly 22% and 20% in 2011 respectively. Likewise, the proportion of senior citizens aged 65 and over also increased, but rapidly from 10% in 1951 to 25% in 2011. In contrast, 30-39-year-old people represented around 18% in 1951 and some 19% in 1971. However, the figure had almost halved to 12% by 2011. Although the percentage of 40-64-year-olds was by far the highest, at 45%, it dropped to just over 30% in 1991 and 20% in 2011.

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