2022年9月10日雅思大作文范文:人們購物習(xí)慣更多的取決于年齡

2023-06-05 12:04:12 來源：中國教育在線

2022年9月10日雅思大作文范文:人們購物習(xí)慣更多的取決于年齡

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

People’s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than other factors.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【話題分類】

社會生活

【題目解析】

題目大意：人們的購物習(xí)慣更多的取決于年齡層，而不是其他因素。是否同意該觀點？

備注：該題目的題干中包含的‘more than other’這個結(jié)構(gòu)，等同于最高級‘the most’，因此該題目的表達(dá)方式是趨于絕對的，可以按照對’絕對觀點’的回答思路來快速應(yīng)對。即：選擇不同意觀點，對題目中的年齡層影響因素做一定的認(rèn)可，但否定它的影響最大這方面；緊接著給出其他同等重要或比它更重要的影響因素。

【寫作思路】

開頭段：引出購物習(xí)慣的差異性，及影響因素的多元性。對題目中的看法表示不完全同意。

主體第一段：闡述購物習(xí)慣的其他重要影響因素，如：收入、個人價值觀、文化、性別等。(不用都做闡述，只需挑出重要的來做說明，并且這里可以分更多的段落)。

主體第二段：認(rèn)可年齡層的部分影響，但引出它的影響的局限性，并得出并不總是最重要的因素。

結(jié)尾段：重申個人的觀點。

【參考范文】

Shopping is arguably the most common daily routine of people,and a series of factors are at work when people do their shopping.Some people believe that our buying habits are determined by how old we are,but I think it is not always the case.

Most people would be influenced by their personal value and social settings when they go shopping.In other words,with diversified educational background and social roles,people will probably make different purchasing decisions,even if they are from the same age group.For instance,when buying cars,one person may choose a designer car for his pursuit for materials,whereas his peers would go for a new energy vehicle due to environmental concerns,and yet others who believe in simply lifestyle may be satisfied with just a scooter.

Another key factor is finance.Higher disposable income allows people to spend more on luxurious items,while a mediocre income compels people to prioritize basic needs like education,groceries,and clothing.Financial condition not only influences what we buy,but also how often we do our shopping.Lower income individuals would be much more prudent and consider less about renewal and replacement of their daily items.

Having said that,age is also one of the primary factors that impact our buying behavior.A teenager’s purchasing choices often seem much more vibrant and flashier than an elderly person.Meanwhile,middle-aged people would naturally focus more on purchasing properties,houses,or vehicles.However,it would be too simplistic to consider age as more influential than other driving forces.

In conclusion,since it is never straightforward to define people’s buying pattern,the determining factors influencing consumer habits would seem endless and impossible to pin down.Therefore,age is just one of the many equally important factors,including but not limited to personal background and beliefs,and financial status.

(309 words)

【語言積累】

arguably adv.可以說是

daily routine日常生活

be at work在起作用

social setting社會環(huán)境，社會背景

diversified adj.多樣化的

social role社會角色

designer car名牌汽車

new energy vehicle新能源汽車

scooter代步車

pursuit for material追求物質(zhì)