雅思大作文范文：家長(zhǎng)應(yīng)鼓勵(lì)孩子減少學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間去體育鍛煉

雅思大作文范文：家長(zhǎng)應(yīng)鼓勵(lì)孩子減少學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間去體育鍛煉

雅思大作文題目：

Parents should encourage children to spend less time in studying and more time in doing physical activities.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

【話題分類】教育類

【題目解析】

題目大意：家長(zhǎng)應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)孩子減少學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間，而去花更多時(shí)間參加體育活動(dòng)，你是否同意？

題型特點(diǎn)：同意與否類題型，需要提出觀點(diǎn)并陳述理由。

本文論文推進(jìn)：開(kāi)頭段提出支持家長(zhǎng)鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生參與體育活動(dòng)。讓步段解釋部分家長(zhǎng)對(duì)于學(xué)生減少學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間的擔(dān)憂，反駁段則分別陳述參加體育活動(dòng)對(duì)于孩子身心健康的積極影響。結(jié)尾重申觀點(diǎn)。

【難點(diǎn)】

題目是從家長(zhǎng)視角出發(fā)，討論是否應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)孩子參加體育鍛煉而犧牲學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間，而不能僅僅探討參加體育活動(dòng)所帶來(lái)的利弊問(wèn)題。

【寫作思路】

開(kāi)頭段：孩子的學(xué)業(yè)表現(xiàn)是大多數(shù)家庭最為重視的，因此如何合理地分配時(shí)間也成了家長(zhǎng)擔(dān)憂的事。表明觀點(diǎn)——我個(gè)人認(rèn)為家長(zhǎng)應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)孩子多參與體育鍛煉。

主體段1（讓步段）：雖然鼓勵(lì)孩子花更多時(shí)間參與體育鍛煉可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)下滑，而且家長(zhǎng)的鼓勵(lì)可能會(huì)讓孩子以參與體育鍛煉為借口逃避相對(duì)無(wú)聊的學(xué)習(xí)，對(duì)孩子的學(xué)業(yè)發(fā)展產(chǎn)生負(fù)面影響。

主體段2：但是，通過(guò)鼓勵(lì)規(guī)律的體育鍛煉活動(dòng)來(lái)促進(jìn)孩子的身心健康更值得重視。一方面積極參加體育鍛煉有助于保持身體健康，這是保證持久學(xué)習(xí)的先決條件。另一方面，家長(zhǎng)也應(yīng)該通過(guò)恰當(dāng)?shù)毓膭?lì)孩子運(yùn)動(dòng)來(lái)幫助他們緩解壓力。

結(jié)尾段：總的來(lái)說(shuō)，考慮到其對(duì)于身心方面的積極影響，家長(zhǎng)應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)孩子分配更多時(shí)間去參與體育活動(dòng)，而且如果安排合理，這也能一定程度上促進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)。

【參考范文】

Children’s academic performance is given top priority to most families,and how to reasonably allocate time has become the prime concern for parents.From my perspective,parents should encourage children to participate in more physical activities even though it may inevitably sacrifice the precious learning time.

Admittedly,encouraging children to spend more time on getting involved in physical exercise may possibly lead to the potential risk of slipping test scores periodically,which is particularly noteworthy under the present education system,where the exam grade is still the most critical and direct criterion to determine whether a child can be admitted to an ideal school and have a bright future.What is more,parents’encouragement may even provide the incentive for children to escape relatively boring academic learning with the plausible excuse of doing physical activities,which will also exert negative impact on children’s academic progress.

However,promoting children’s physical health and mental well-being through encouraging routine physical activities should be attached more importance.For one thing,taking an active part in doing physical activities is beneficial to maintaining body fitness,which is a prerequisite for persistent study.As is known to all,academic learning process generally means long periods of sedentary study,participating in more sports activities can effectively help children to avoid the potential health risk,such as obesity and nearsightedness problems.For another,parents can help to relieve their children’s stress by pushing them to take exercise,given that the resulting hormonic level change of engaging in physical activities is conducive to the release of tension derived from the busy study schedule,which is also of great value to improve learning efficiency in the long term.

In conclusion,I believe that parents should encourage children to allocate more time to doing physical activities considering the positive influences both physically and mentally and if arranged properly,it can also,to some extent,facilitate the learning process.

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【亮點(diǎn)詞匯及短語(yǔ)】

1.priority(n.)優(yōu)先

2.reasonably(adv.)合理地

3.allocate(v.)分配

4.prime(adj.)主要的

5.perspective(n.)觀點(diǎn)

6.inevitably(adv.)不可避免地

7.sacrifice(n.)犧牲

8.involve(v.)參加

9.potential(adj.)潛在的

10.slip(v.)下滑

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