雅思大作文范文：離開(kāi)家里生活是否更好

雅思大作文范文：離開(kāi)家里生活是否更好

雅思大作文題目：

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In some countries,university students live at home,while in other countries,university students go to other cities rather than live with their family.

Do you think the benefits of living away from home outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【話題分類】

社會(huì)類

【題目解析】

題目大意：在一些國(guó)家，大學(xué)生住在家里，而在另外一些國(guó)家，大學(xué)生去其他城市，不和家庭成員住在一起。你認(rèn)為離開(kāi)家里生活帶來(lái)的好處是否大于問(wèn)題？

題型特點(diǎn)：利弊比較類題型，需要圍繞題目所給現(xiàn)象提出其帶來(lái)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，并進(jìn)行展開(kāi)討論。

本文論文推進(jìn)：開(kāi)頭段引入話題。讓步段說(shuō)明離家居住存在一定弊端，比如疏遠(yuǎn)了和家人的關(guān)系，立論段說(shuō)明對(duì)于大學(xué)生而言，這種決定帶來(lái)更多利處，比如提高社交能力以及獨(dú)立性等。結(jié)尾重申觀點(diǎn)。

【難點(diǎn)】題目針對(duì)的群體是university students，即討論對(duì)于大學(xué)生而言，離開(kāi)家里生活帶來(lái)的利弊比較，注意結(jié)合群體特征進(jìn)行針對(duì)性的討論說(shuō)明。

【寫作思路】

開(kāi)頭段：大學(xué)時(shí)光是學(xué)生成長(zhǎng)成才的重要階段。不同的學(xué)生對(duì)于是否在大學(xué)階段離家生活有不同的選擇。就我而言，這一決定利大于弊。

讓步段：誠(chéng)然，大學(xué)生離開(kāi)家會(huì)一定程度上導(dǎo)致家庭關(guān)系疏遠(yuǎn)。很明顯，遠(yuǎn)距離容易導(dǎo)致關(guān)系疏遠(yuǎn)，因?yàn)榧彝コ蓡T都各自忙碌，尤其是那些滿心期待加入新鮮大學(xué)生活的學(xué)生。因此，缺乏及時(shí)的溝通和有效的交流會(huì)導(dǎo)致疏遠(yuǎn)的家庭關(guān)系，在沒(méi)有家庭成員陪伴和支持的情況下，更加加劇了大學(xué)生的孤獨(dú)感。

主體段：但是，我們不應(yīng)該忽略當(dāng)大學(xué)生選擇離開(kāi)家庭的庇護(hù)也會(huì)有潛在的好處。一方面，大學(xué)生可以抓住這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)提高人際交往技能，這將成為他們?cè)谖磥?lái)激烈競(jìng)爭(zhēng)環(huán)境下的有利優(yōu)勢(shì)。離家在外為他們創(chuàng)造了和同齡人交流的機(jī)會(huì)，而不是花費(fèi)大量的時(shí)間在家庭瑣事上，這意味著大學(xué)生在這個(gè)微型社會(huì)里會(huì)逐步提高溝通能力、解決問(wèn)題能力以及合作能力等，為未來(lái)融入社會(huì)打下良好基礎(chǔ)。另一方面，當(dāng)離家在外，個(gè)人獨(dú)立性可以被激發(fā)并培養(yǎng)，這也被視作成人的標(biāo)志。一旦大學(xué)生有了獨(dú)立的意識(shí)，他們就能逐步掌握獨(dú)立處理問(wèn)題或者獨(dú)立判斷的技能。

結(jié)尾段：總的來(lái)說(shuō)，對(duì)于大學(xué)生而言，離家在外的確會(huì)產(chǎn)生更多積極影響，尤其是提高人際交往能力和自主性，盡管他們也需要注意維持良好的家庭關(guān)系。

【參考范文】

The college years are regarded as a critical period for students'growth and accomplishment.Different university students make their own choices about whether to live away from home when being educated.From my perspective,the decision of leaving home certainly brings more benefits than drawbacks.

Admittedly,university students'living away from home may,to some extent,lead to family alienation.It seems clear that the long distance easily breeds the estrangement considering that family members are all engaged in their own schedule,especially those young people who are readily involved in the fresh and brilliant college life.Therefore,it is the lack of timely effective communication that is likely to result in distant family relationship,exacerbating the sense of loneliness among university students when losing the company and support from family members.

However,we should not ignore the potential benefits for university students'growth when they choose to leave the shelter of family.For one thing,college students can seize the opportunity to develop interpersonal skills,which can be a strong edge during the future fierce competition.Living away from home creates tremendous chances for students to communicate with peers instead of spending a huge amount of time on meaningless household affairs,which means students will gradually improve communication,problem-solving and cooperation abilities in the miniature community,laying a good foundation for later integration into the society.For another,individual independence can be stimulated and thus cultivated when living far from home,which can be considered as a symbol for adult identity.Once the awareness of being independent is generated among college students,the skills,from handling problems by themselves to making judgements independently can be mastered progressively.

In conclusion,for university students,living away from home exerts more positive impacts on the development of interpersonal skills and autonomy,although they should also pay attention to maintaining close family bonds.

(313 words)

【語(yǔ)言積累】

1.critical(adj.)關(guān)鍵的

2.accomplishment(n.)成就

3.alienation(n.)疏遠(yuǎn)

4.estrangement(n.)疏遠(yuǎn)

5.engage(v.)參與

6.schedule(n.)日程

7.involve(v.)加入

8.timely(adj.)及時(shí)的

9.negotiation(n.)溝通

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